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JV Guimaraes's avatar

The beginning was a bit slow -- too many characters and info to handle for a first time. BUT, once the blues appear, everything kicked into high gear. A really enjoyable read, some very nice tech touches like the simulated audio, comms and the weapons modes.

> The moon of Jupiter was beautiful in its desolation, in its hostility, in how a world so covered in that which brings life so thoroughly had rebuked those who had come to introduce it to death.

Fantastic stuff, keep it coming

Elliot Kessler's avatar

This was a lot of fun. I enjoy fast-paced action sci-fi, so this is right up my alley. Thanks for sharing!

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