The beginning was a bit slow -- too many characters and info to handle for a first time. BUT, once the blues appear, everything kicked into high gear. A really enjoyable read, some very nice tech touches like the simulated audio, comms and the weapons modes.
> The moon of Jupiter was beautiful in its desolation, in its hostility, in how a world so covered in that which brings life so thoroughly had rebuked those who had come to introduce it to death.
Sweet, glad you liked it! One of our goals is to avoid just doing massive exposition dumps at the beginning, so we decided to start in medias res and try to keep the amount of introduction down.
The beginning was a bit slow -- too many characters and info to handle for a first time. BUT, once the blues appear, everything kicked into high gear. A really enjoyable read, some very nice tech touches like the simulated audio, comms and the weapons modes.
> The moon of Jupiter was beautiful in its desolation, in its hostility, in how a world so covered in that which brings life so thoroughly had rebuked those who had come to introduce it to death.
Fantastic stuff, keep it coming
Sweet, glad you liked it! One of our goals is to avoid just doing massive exposition dumps at the beginning, so we decided to start in medias res and try to keep the amount of introduction down.
This was a lot of fun. I enjoy fast-paced action sci-fi, so this is right up my alley. Thanks for sharing!
Glad you enjoyed it!